Hi autumn, I like how your friend let you take care of his horse! He must of been a nice boy. But there are some things you could improve on; the first one is how your I's are not capital letters, and the second is your name should have a capital 'a' at the start. Thanks, Kyle
Hi autumn,
ReplyDeleteI like how your friend let you take care of his horse!
He must of been a nice boy.
But there are some things you could improve on;
the first one is how your I's are not capital letters, and the second is your name should have a capital 'a' at the start.
Thanks,
Kyle